Monday, July 31, 2006

Bathing in Erotic Emotions

Have you ever been bathed in a woman?
Drenched, by her, to your very core?
The very essence of her, soaked into your skin
In a pool of lust, you have ripped from her core?

Have you ever been bathed in a woman?
Showered in her stream of lust?
Had desire splashed on your skin?
Taken more with every thrust?

Have you ever been bathed in a woman?
Lie naked in her pool of devotion?
Felt the love pouring from her very core,
Drenching you in the liquid, erotic emotion?

9 comments:

Spirit said...

Brandy ...I am at a loss. There are not words in my mind that I could use to decribe how I feel about this post.
INCREDIBLE

adam said...

"bathed in a woman."

So beautiful. Leaving me breathless, again.

xx,adam.

gia said...

Stunning and breathtaking! The words that flow from your mind through your fingertips leave us wanting more.

Anonymous said...

Some of these comments make me want to puke...

"bathed in a woman"...

I can quote directly from a blog post in a comment and hope to get some traffic to my site too... but I'm not a loser..you shitheads.

Let Brandy write - comment only when you have something to say...I read her blog everyday and you newbies are screwing it up.

gia said...

Some of these comments make me want to puke...

"bathed in a woman"...

I can quote directly from a blog post in a comment and hope to get some traffic to my site too... but I'm not a loser..you shitheads.

Let Brandy write - comment only when you have something to say...I read her blog everyday and you newbies are screwing it up.


I, nor the others who comment, are leaving comments in order to bring traffic to our blogs. She writes beautifully and while some of the comments you find make you want to puke, why don't you take a look at your own comment. And while you're at it, maybe you could come out of hiding rather than post anonymously, clean up your mouth and leave something other than what you've just spewed out for Brandy to read as well? Maybe take your own advice, too. Since you read her every day.

Not trying to start a flame war, I only wanted to comment on this. My apologies for offending anyone.

Brandy said...

Thank you Gia.

Thank you to all who commented.

Anonymous-
I LIKE THE COMMENTS!!
Even if they are just quoting a line in my poetry they like. I have always written every word on this site since day one, for me. If someone reads it, ok. If they don't, that's ok too.

But I like the comments.

They let me know that I am not the only one who thinks I have a little talent.

gia said...

You're welcome!

adam said...

Well. I had to respond to this "anonymous" comment, above.

I've only been made aware of this, and I'm sorry I didn't see it sooner. First off, I've quoted from the text of the poem, in order to highlight a line, or phrase, which jumps out, or causes you to stop and admire the way in which it was used.

Anyone, familiar with the art of poetry, or the study of literature in general, keys into this, and finds pleasure in the gracefulness of the author's writing style. It is a talent--made up of few words, like, "bathed in a woman"--that can strike one, more than any other word which comes before, or after.

I highly doubt, that you read this blog each day, "anonymous." Because, if you had you might have learned the simple lesson of love, and passion, which Brandy so wonderfully shares with us, her reader's.

I suggest, that if you don't have anything to offer, but bile and nasty comments, you have no place within this space.

I do read here, each day...and, I'll continue to comment. Sometimes, a post doesn't require comment..other times, yes. But so far, I've found myself admiring each new poem--regardless of the quotes, I may use, to say so.

And that, is all I wanted to say.

You owe me, and Brandy..and, everyone who visits here, an apology. That, "anonymous," I leave to you.

Adam.

Percy said...

well... much later... I am going through you posts... spending a lot if time soaking in your writing..
getting the full scent of you..

you bring out such feeling in your words...
this one.. 'bathed in a woman'
WOW
I can't describe how much I feel with those words.. how much desire to experience such a feeling....