Thursday, July 20, 2006

Unquenchable Thirst

Gasping for air, unable to swallow
Drowning in a pool of liquid lust
The tide increasing, the flow unending
Spurting forth with every thrust
Our bodies drenched in a cascading desire
Rippled with lust, splashed in pleasure
Trying to quench an unquenchable thirst,
Bathing in a passion, beyond imaginable measure.

8 comments:

Spirit said...

This one I loved ....

Ryder said...

You amaze me at times.
This is one of them.

Brandy said...

I love this one myself. I feel it is one of my more amazing pictures of words. Thank you to both of you.

Anonymous said...

Brandy, call your webmaster at work.

gia said...

Drowning in a pool of liquid lust

My favorite line... your writing is incredible. I found you through Spirit, by the way, and I'm glad that I did! :)

adam said...

Have to agree with Gia!

Thanks for dropping by my Blog..

I'll be back here, for sure. You've got "passion," with a capital "P"!!

Nice, and naughty, poetry.

Do you mind if I link you?? Let me know.

xx,adam.

Brandy said...

Gia-
Glad you found me. And that is one of my favorite lines also.

Adam-
Link away my friend. I enjoyed your blog as well. I will be back.

Thank you both for your kind words of encouragment.

gia said...

You're very welcome, Brandy. If it's ok, I'd like to link you as well. :)