Tuesday, March 27, 2007

The heat between them was intense.
The desire she conveyed,
Through her eyes alone,
Went on for hours.
The passion built.
The flames were fanned by every look.
Two bodies on fire,
Waiting for the moment.
The glorious moment,
When they can be alone,
And allow the sense of touch,
To completely overwhelm them.


Percy said...

your words create so much heat, so much energy. That is the perfect picture for your words.

Tommy said...

I love the intensity and the urgency you express. Outstanding stuff!

BJ said...

Wow, I love your writing. So raw and erotic. I'm definitely reading more. I'd like to link to you.